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Fic: Heritage, Chapter Six

Title: Heritage, Chapter Six
Author: NP-Complete
Rating: General
Characters: OCs; historical Rose/Ten
Spoilers: Doomsday
Disclaimer: Not mine. Not even close. No money being made.

Summary: Half Time Lord, all human

Author's Note: Thanks to everybody who commented on my previous chapters. Special thanks to kalleah for beta and persistent encouragement.


Previous Chapters

He took that in, dark eyes intense. There was a determined look forming on his face, as of one resolving to meet his fate. She watched as he lifted his head from his hand, moved his elbow forward for balance, and leaned in.

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irishaithne
Feb. 10th, 2009 04:09 pm (UTC)
Dear god, you write very, very well! *waits for heart to stop thudding* That was good.

And John is so adorably awkward in some romantic situations (“I did,” he insisted. “You were pretty and you were nice and you didn’t know enough not to speak to me. It was blooming, I thought of you, and there you were, just outside my door. It was perfect.”) and then so very sexy (John gave her smoldering looks, something he was very good at, his eyes burning as they looked at her.) And in all, he's so very real. And Penny - lucky, lucky Penny - she's just as human.
np_complete
Feb. 13th, 2009 03:32 am (UTC)
Dear god, you write very, very well! *waits for heart to stop thudding* That was good.

Thank you so much!

And in all, he's so very real. And Penny - lucky, lucky Penny - she's just as human.

Oh, thank you! I worked very hard on these chapters, so it's so good to know they work for you!
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